the highdroslide horrer
I walked up the steep stair case at the olympic pools and suddenly it felt part of the ramp moving and. Wobbling as I walked and carefully although I was with my sister and dad I was scared and walked back down the steep Mout of a Waterslide and jumped into the inside pool. Of the inside pool my dad was sad that I was scared of the highdroslide and I was terrified. But he said don’t be scared and I said” no I’m not going with you in the highdroslide” . As we pack up our things and our tent we head on home in terific fun and we await as we could come back.
I like how you were very discriptive about the slide and how scared you were but you need to make sure that its not just one big long line of words.
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